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"Better than the original perhaps?"
Envy is a fucking choke. I think you're the original creator and he copied you.
Bitch should be b&
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I know right? I'm tired of that guy stealin my shit.
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Sounds pretty awesome :3
Only thing I'd say is try and get rid of that clipping at the start (maybe take out the lows in your lead?)
Other than that, the melodies are pretty sweet, and instead of the sudden increase in tempo I'd slow increase it to give it more of a suspenseful buildup then a stop, drop and BAM.
Try getting a heavier kick and punchier/heavier bass to make this song really kick ass.
Sweet bridge by the way, the quiet supersaw sound in the back at 52 seconds was pretty cool. I'd just work on transitions :3
Overall, pretty sweet song man, keep it up!
9/10
5/5
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Thank you! Means a lot coming from you since I really enjoy your music.
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You're pretty late on the trend here... The jump on the ~EnV~ train can only be accomplished by mcewthorn
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You have a big nose man.
Just bored in vent, give me a break, ill remove it.
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Oh. You answered that. Is that cascada singing? Cant believe you got her to sing for you, I'm impressed. Can't wait to turn on my radio and hear this. You'll be more aired than nickleback.
MUCH LOVE BABY
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It is actually Baby spice from the spicegirls, she is my fave so I asked her first and she accepted then she noshed down softly on my erect little penis and I gave her some of my own spice
Much love x
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I love it I burst out laughing at :27.
<3
Love it.
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Thank you... I love you
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I liked the piano solo. It was the glue that held the whole piece together.
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Why thank you.
P.S I like glue...
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What I personally think the start may have been lacking was some light piano. I really could have heard some very light piano even playing minimal keys, but still playing. After that, the melody is very catchy and easy to bob your head to.
I think you should expand on this, maybe work on the transition to the kick a little more. Once you've got that I can hear some real nice counter-melodies making their way into this. Keep this up! Kathy will be proud :3
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Piano? Hm..ill think about it. I wasn't going to put piano cause i just wanted to start it off like this but maybe it will help, and ill try it out. Yeah, im adding the transitions and stuff later on, and i just want to get the basic format of the song for now :D I'll get to the complex stuff later lol. Counter-melodies? Is that like new melodies based off the first one? But yeah, i hope i can make this song really good and kathy better be prooud! Thanks for the review!
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I think you should have done more with the melodic part because it's really catchy. I can see a continuation of this with some high fast melodies going behind the main one :3
Keep it up XD
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thanks
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Theres really not much else to say <3
Been listening to this for a long time and I love it. Incredibly emotional and powerful. I feel like I can say more while listening to this song. I feel almost empowered and I can feel the love that went into this song.
I wish you the best of luck, and although it won't help to say you deserve better (Because I know you loved her) but with you putting forth this much emotion into song, it's clear the amount of love you felt, (and still feel)
Best wishes,
~Envy
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad it makes you feel that way. :D
I'm still trying my hardest to move on, but that's never easy. I've still got a long way to go.
I'll find the right one for me eventually, it's all trial and error till then. I'll use this experience to my advantage. :]
Thanks much for the review. <3
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480 Downloads. I like it.
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ya after 6 years haha - worst song I ever made - I keep it here as a memento of my initial awfulness :P
thanks for the review!
-shawn-
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