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Sounds pretty awesome :3
Only thing I'd say is try and get rid of that clipping at the start (maybe take out the lows in your lead?)
Other than that, the melodies are pretty sweet, and instead of the sudden increase in tempo I'd slow increase it to give it more of a suspenseful buildup then a stop, drop and BAM.
Try getting a heavier kick and punchier/heavier bass to make this song really kick ass.
Sweet bridge by the way, the quiet supersaw sound in the back at 52 seconds was pretty cool. I'd just work on transitions :3
Overall, pretty sweet song man, keep it up!
9/10
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Thank you! Means a lot coming from you since I really enjoy your music.
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I love it sir. Make my babies your babies. Please.
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The drums were a pretty cool idea, but I would have tuned them up a little bit. They sounded a little downpitched from the rest of the song, but thats just my personal opinion ^^
Also, the tune that comes in around 48 seconds could have been a little louder. But once all the percussion and bass is playing it's kind of overpowering. (I'd turn up the bass on the bass, but lower the volume personally, it interferes with the song and doesn't carry enough low frequency IMO)
With the high strings they sound really cool, I'd have done it a little differently with the melody, the last note goes down, I would have made it go up instead, to give more of a climax feeling.
With the bongos though, they're a really unique idea, and give a sweet feeling to the song. I liked them alot, gave it a jungly feel.
Overall nice work, I'd just work on the mixing a tad to clean it up a bit. And levels of everything could be touched upon, but other than that awesome song you have here :3. Very spacey and relaxed.
Keep it up! 5'd
~Envy
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You're pretty late on the trend here... The jump on the ~EnV~ train can only be accomplished by mcewthorn
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You have a big nose man.
Just bored in vent, give me a break, ill remove it.
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Oh. You answered that. Is that cascada singing? Cant believe you got her to sing for you, I'm impressed. Can't wait to turn on my radio and hear this. You'll be more aired than nickleback.
MUCH LOVE BABY
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It is actually Baby spice from the spicegirls, she is my fave so I asked her first and she accepted then she noshed down softly on my erect little penis and I gave her some of my own spice
Much love x
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Pretty bad. I wouldn't have uploaded it or even made it in the first place.
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"The cymbal at the start is pretty high frequency"
Fix that
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I love it I burst out laughing at :27.
<3
Love it.
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Thank you... I love you
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I liked the piano solo. It was the glue that held the whole piece together.
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Why thank you.
P.S I like glue...
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Add Daviecrocker196 to your aim, I'll send you a midi I made of the melody, then you can try again XD
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