Cool
The beginning is a great way to get someone anticipating a large build up...
But wait, it doesnt explode, it kinda comes in with a bass, kick, and eventually a clap.
I really like the melody, but the panning synth thing or whatever it is does get a little annoying, but it stopped, thats good.
Still waiting for it to explode...
I like the kick going down in pitch as a roll, thats a good idea XD quite original.
Bah Fl presets = no good, try to keep your instrumental choices as ORIGINAL as possible and stay away from just keep the same instrument you pick.
Near the end of the song, the melody kinda gets lossed and you have a quiet synth playing which doesnt really follow the melody.... The hi hat playing on the off beats gets cut toooooo quickly and sounds like its forced...
I know this sounds like all bad stuff but its my form of constructive criticism... it was a good song with a very catchy melody... just a few areas to work on, GOOD WORK!