Envy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(E-E) Zero Alliance]

Hmmmm

I cant say I'm a big fan of the 8th notes, but i really liked the 16th notes, they seemed to have more of a melody than the 8th notes... Seemed like i donno the 8th note melody kinda didn't seem to have the right arrangement of notes for some reason!. Good work. With the arp that came in at the start, you almost it expect the song to be a dance song with that arp doing some crazy stuff ^^, nice work.

Everlasting-Elements responds:

It was something that I was trying out for my new song that is coming. I'm trying to learn how to make a good arp out of the eighth notes so I can make a 16th note lead melody. We'll see what happens.
Thanks for your review man!

[(E-E) Crying For Love[Hurting]]

"This isnt your song!"

JK JK JK... I was just reading the reviews, and although people say it's not yours thats kind of a compliment cause it means theyve heard it before and liked it XD. Ocon, you, and I all had our shots at this song. Wouldn't it be cool if we had a 3 way finale collab to this song? Kind of a tribute to it where we all contribute the best parts of our own remixes to it? Sounded kinda like a good idea to me. The kicks were kinda overpowered kinda fuzzed up the song, and i like the bass effect although it may have been a bit loud XD. Nice remix of your own song! AND FOR EVERYONE ELSE, THIS IS HIS SONG!

Everlasting-Elements responds:

I suppose it could be comment, right?
The 3 way collaboration sounds cool, but OCON bailed out on music, so he can't really be included can he?
The bass is my best part, so if that does happen, you can use the bass, and we can fine tune it!
THIS IS MY SONG WOOT!
Thanks for the review bro!

[(E-E) Pirate's Gigue (KH RMX)]

Love the melody

I just love the melody to this song ^^. Well done, dont really know what else to say, cause its a remix! Nice work!

Everlasting-Elements responds:

The melody is very bad ass!
Thanks for the review! I owe you man!

[(E-E) Triad Tribulation]

hehe

I just love that intro XD. Not sure if i like the new pad/chorus in the backround, it may stick out too much in some parts. But I do love this song XD. it's got a little fuzz, but most songs do that come out of FL, but overall mastering is pretty good! Love the drums XD, I'm glad you continued with this song instead of giving it up XD.

Good work!

Everlasting-Elements responds:

I liked the intro too, but perhaps I didn't snah that 'lovey' feeling in the song at all. Really, that is what I was aiming for.
The pad may have been loud, so I'll work on that in my next song, if I make one. Just kidding, I'll make a new one.
I hate fuzz! I probably didn't Equo it enough or something! Damnit. Sounded good in the FL version though.
Drums are good to me.
I was gonna quit this song because I lost progress when my computer crashed, but luckily, I saved it on my sisters computer, so I continued its production.
Thanks for the review man!

[Candyland Heaven]

Cool

It sounds pretty good! But this may just be me, but I think the first melody you have goes a little too long with no real big change. Just a small complaint from me. Also, The second real melody that comes in (yknow that synth) I dont feel it, I donno, doesn't fit the song in the right way. The song was really well done, but those two things are all i have against it... Nice beat, and such XD Good job

dj-padman1 responds:

thanks. I agree about the second synth, your right.
Strange no-one mentioned the main build and the climax, which is the key feature of the track.

[[DPS] - SOTP 07]

Excellent

The only real problem that I didnt like was the intro and it seems the instrument at it's build up kind of gets too bassy or something, I donno how to explain it. I think I liked the original better XD. Keep of the good work

Check out my audio some time XD

Dj-Powerstorm responds:

Thanks for your opinion, i'll get back to basics,... sod the basics in this case if it was better. I love your work btw, one of my favs

[[DPS.0] - Story of the Poor]

Nice!

I was a bit skeptical at first about the intro, but when the drums and the pad got going, it was really good. It was really catchy, and i liked the beat. Do you use like the Acid pro studio or FL or what?

Dj-Powerstorm responds:

Ahh, that is for me to know and for you to find out. My secret. Cheers for the reveiw

[[nightmare]]

Alright

I think the vocals were a little too loud, so they stuck out a lot. maybe some reverb on it or something to make it less "sharp." Yknow? I like the use of the arp and the main melody sounded very Blade-ish and got a little repetitive but so did the blade song XD. Overall, not bad, could be better, but not bad for now XD

snayk responds:

Well, this was one of the first songs I ever made (the fifth, actually). It's over a year old. I was quite proud of it at the time.

I still think it's a pretty decent track. It's one of my better old pieces.

If I could go back and change something, it probably WOULD be the vocals you mentioned. Not because they sound too sharp but because they come with FL Studio (even though I altered them), and I'd rather use something external.

[among the souls]

Nice man

Very Chill. I like it. I really like the almost ambient beginning, and i like how you had the little variations to the lead. Although, i think the drums could have been a little better, they were pretty well done (good use of the fl presets atleast.) You've got a lot of talent if you keep making music like this XD. IM me sometime, maybe a collab or something (i just got some new drum packs, but havnt posted any songs yet with them in it)

My screen name is Daviecrocker196
Give me a shout.

5/5 10/10 excellent work.

P.S. I personally dont mind the repetition cause I love repitition also XD.

snayk responds:

Thanks for the review.

I don't usually use the FL drum samples (or at least keep them this raw). I don't know what I was thinking. The part I regret the most is the clap =/ I could always go back and change it, but I don't feel like resubmitting it.

I didn't mind the repetition in this one either. I usually DON'T mind the repetition in my songs, but I feel obliged to admit that I know they're repetitive, or else reviewers complain about it.

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Vampires dream]

Excellent

I really liked the intro to the arp. It really fit the song well. I liked the vocals too, they fit the "feel" of the song, and the humming or whatever that was, was real good too. I feel that after the lyrics you could have i donno, maybe pumped up the bass and everything, and had a big synth come in, or maybe that synth you have going and maybe a counter melody on it. Possibly bring back the chords you had at the start. I just feel that after the vocals I was half expecting a "big bang" to create almost a second half to the song. Other than that, I thought it sounded very professional and overall very well done. 10'd and 5'd (returning the favor.) Nice work, and keep it up you two.

DistortionResonance responds:

Haha, that humming was Distortions voice. Most of the vocoder/recording was Resonance, though.

This is, actually, the unfinished version of the song. We DO break into a huge dramatic melody with an awesome drum synth and everything :) I think it's gonna be too big to put on Newgrounds though... we'll see what we can do.

Thanks for the review!