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[The build up]

Not bad

Again, need more of a set melody but still not bad... especially for your first song! You will definately get better. (And ignore scores given, newer artists get what I like to call, "the zero voter wave"... Not necessarily newer artists, just if your name isnt "B0UNC3" "Dimrain47" or "ParagonX9" You will experience zero voters all the time... just dont give up! And dont let them get you down! Keep working!

HiniberusDelius responds:

Thanks for trying to uplift me, I thought that no one liked this track but still, thanks a lot.

[Defied reality (Unfinished)]

Cool

Needs more of a melody per se... And some of the offbeat notes sound a little, eh... Not placed right? Not too bad, keep working.

HiniberusDelius responds:

Much appriciated with the tutorial I added you on AIM, hope to talk soon.

[Cold as Fire]

Love it

For some reason most of your songs (mainly this one and Eating Pie) remind me of gears of war... i dont really know why either, it just makes me think of gears of war... which makes me happy XD. Nice work. BTW I added you to the deserving underdog artists on the BBS, hopefully that will get you a little publicity XD.

Go eat some pie, man.

ListenToMyMusic responds:

Hey, thanks alot. I didn't even realize that I had a review here. I'm gonna check your stuff out again

ListenToMyMusic

[The Start (ClubEdit)]

Cool

I like the beat of the whole thing and the feel. I cant say the like the synth that comes in... It feels almost ... "dirty" I donno if thats the word i'm looking for. Like the lead in my rush2049 song, it just sounds dirty and almost kinda screws up everything, and theres a part where it sounds a little off key when the notes start changing. But overall not a bad job on this song, just a little repetitive. Try changing it up a little bit, but good job!

I liked the quiet part, but didn't really like the beep during that. especially when it went off beat, cause without an actually beat it just sounded... Off beat. Good job though.

Pulstate responds:

Cheers mate, i didn't mean to add a beep but it was heavily in the back of my mind so i fucked it in for a look, and you see how awful it sounds.

Cheers mate. :)

[Outcast Chaos {Outcast Raven}]

Meh

It sounds cool at the start, buuuuuuut I'm not a huge fan of solely arps in a song. Kinda jumbles the song a little too much. Yes I know you had more than just arps in it, but they were too loud to hear the rest. Overall it's alright, but the arps kinda drown out the rest. At some points make it sound strange.. Anywho, I liked the beat, maybe it could have beena bit heavier, but i liked it anywho. Good job.

Sylacone responds:

Hmm... Well, if I took the arp out... It wouldnt be the same song. It totally destroy it. Unless I make a pattern exactly like it just not so jumbled.

Thats what Imma do. Thanks for listening.

[Crimson nights]

Cool

But again, FL presets are bad! Especially the drums again...

You need to start "picking up" your songs to make them feel more techno instead of ambient. But good nonetheless. I like the piano XD, but maybe more of a melody with a different instrument rather than rely on that arp so much. But good job.

ink-dripped-heart responds:

thanks man. im not gonna use the actual drums anymore. i've started to just learn how to make more of a plain 4-beat. thanks for your suggestions.

[Burning Wings (remix)]

Cool

For your first song this is pretty good. I like the arrangements of the drums, just dont like the drums themselves, Fl presets are bad unless you absolutely fill them with reverbs and stuff.
I like the piano too, gave a nice feel to the song. You should remake this, and have more of a beat going through the song to make it more exciting, cause i could imagine this getting exciting, but it never happend DX. Nice job, especially for your first song.

ink-dripped-heart responds:

thanks you. i originally came up with the main melody on guitar and made this song out of it. so some day i'll try to remake it better. thanks for your comment