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NIEC JAWB I LIEK IT. Now I wanna remix these vocals :3
Herpaderp
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NG
NIEC JAWB I LIEK IT. Now I wanna remix these vocals :3
Better than the original perhaps?
Envy is a fucking choke. I think you're the original creator and he copied you.
Bitch should be b&
I know right? I'm tired of that guy stealin my shit.
Pretty cool
Sounds pretty awesome :3
Only thing I'd say is try and get rid of that clipping at the start (maybe take out the lows in your lead?)
Other than that, the melodies are pretty sweet, and instead of the sudden increase in tempo I'd slow increase it to give it more of a suspenseful buildup then a stop, drop and BAM.
Try getting a heavier kick and punchier/heavier bass to make this song really kick ass.
Sweet bridge by the way, the quiet supersaw sound in the back at 52 seconds was pretty cool. I'd just work on transitions :3
Overall, pretty sweet song man, keep it up!
9/10
5/5
Thank you! Means a lot coming from you since I really enjoy your music.
Funny...
You're pretty late on the trend here... The jump on the ~EnV~ train can only be accomplished by mcewthorn
aahahaha
I love it I burst out laughing at :27.
<3
Love it.
Thank you... I love you
hahahaha
I liked the piano solo. It was the glue that held the whole piece together.
Good start ^^
What I personally think the start may have been lacking was some light piano. I really could have heard some very light piano even playing minimal keys, but still playing. After that, the melody is very catchy and easy to bob your head to.
I think you should expand on this, maybe work on the transition to the kick a little more. Once you've got that I can hear some real nice counter-melodies making their way into this. Keep this up! Kathy will be proud :3
Piano? Hm..ill think about it. I wasn't going to put piano cause i just wanted to start it off like this but maybe it will help, and ill try it out. Yeah, im adding the transitions and stuff later on, and i just want to get the basic format of the song for now :D I'll get to the complex stuff later lol. Counter-melodies? Is that like new melodies based off the first one? But yeah, i hope i can make this song really good and kathy better be prooud! Thanks for the review!
<33
Theres really not much else to say <3
Been listening to this for a long time and I love it. Incredibly emotional and powerful. I feel like I can say more while listening to this song. I feel almost empowered and I can feel the love that went into this song.
I wish you the best of luck, and although it won't help to say you deserve better (Because I know you loved her) but with you putting forth this much emotion into song, it's clear the amount of love you felt, (and still feel)
Best wishes,
~Envy
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad it makes you feel that way. :D
I'm still trying my hardest to move on, but that's never easy. I've still got a long way to go.
I'll find the right one for me eventually, it's all trial and error till then. I'll use this experience to my advantage. :]
Thanks much for the review. <3
HMMMMMMM
I can't say I enjoy the opening whistle too much, thats essentially my only real complaint XD
That and the hats were a tad high, making my ears go ow a little (but I have my headphones really loud anyways)
The rest of it was pretty good, it had a nice flow and gave a pretty happy feeling. I'd just say work a little more on transitions and keeping the track moving at the same time. You got the melodies down pretty good, so just keep it up!
I loved the piano type synth that comes inat 1:36 playing the arp btw XD
~Envy
lol Thanks again Envy i agree with the hats lol XD but anyways thanks for the 9 and the review
~Crakle~
( i agree with the hi-hats being a bit loud :P)
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