Liked it
But i didn't love it. Personally I wasn't a huge fan of being able to hear when the vocals simply cut out. (Perhaps some fade,) Unless you were trying to get that effect, than you did a good job XD. But beyond that:
Originality - I Liked the expirimentation thing with all the different drums going on at the same time, it gives you a sort of familiar with the FL drums, but flips them upside down. You don't hear many calm low-key songs here (most people try to make their song as loud and bassy as possible, and its nice to hear a more quiet song... Although a previous review was right, it should be under Ambient or something along those lines...
Diversity- Again ^^^^ just look up for everything about that...
Clarity- I never really knew what clarity meant so i came up with my own meaning and that is how I think the music flowed... For the most part i thought it flowed well, just didn't like the cut's of vocals (again thats just me, dont change anything you do just cause of me)
Effort- Its obvious you spent a lot of time on this, and it reflects in the music. Also, it's very long, which means to keep it interesting you had to change the tune and stuff as you went along (Which can get slightly annoying as you begin thinking EVERYTHING sounds the same)
Overall- I think you did a very solid, good job on this. I can see you getting A lot better in the future, although. With this song comes a sense of great potential in you o.O. This is my first *full* review, and i figured it should go to you, seems as to how you take the time to review my stuff.
Keep up the excellent work!
(And by the way, this review took me a while to write and I've listened to the song probably 6 or 7 times over now, and I really am starting to get used to the vocals, and it actually kind of flows with the song, the whole cut thing... Yep thats about it!