Nice work
It sounded good, I have to say the offbeat hat was FAR too loud. 8/ Kind of dominating the song a bit too much IMO.
Other than that everything sounded pretty nice, I like your progression near the middle, and your kick was pretty nice too. Very full. Another thing was it lacked a bit of a bass. Seemed to need a bit more oomph if you get what I mean, alot of it seemed pretty high frequency.
I hope you don't see this review as hateful because it's not, I just think telling someone what you think should be changed is more helpful than saying "great song!"
It was a good sound though! Keep it up! My only REAL complaint is the hi hat. I'd like to see a reuploaded version of this with a quieter hat.
~Envy