The bassline is actually really catchy!
Your melodies actually have a great deal of potential! Very upbeat and full of energy, I like it!
I myself am a melody person, so everything else doesn't matter to me nearly as much. Great bassline and melodies
Way to work with what you've got...
Get yourself some new samples and you could be really good!
Try vengeance club samples... once you get some stronger samples you could be great man.
Keep it up!